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Re: These Mongooses!
Oof, thanks for the compliment! I actually wrote this towards the end of 6th grade to be exact, so I think 7th grade would've been a better description. I'm really ...
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Re: These Mongooses!
Hello Grav! Thank you for your time you spent on this piece, really appreciate it. I think I had another sentence for that line, but must've forgotten it when typing ...
May 8, 2020 -
Re: These Mongooses!
Shout-out to @LadyGemstone for suddenly giving me points out of pure kindness!
May 8, 2020 -
Re: Hide
Thanks everyone, for all the positive reviews and sugge
May 6, 2020 - Re: Caught in Quicksand May 3, 2020
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Re: Hide
Whew, coming online after a long time. Thanks for your review! My language was very simple, no metaphors intended honestly, but I guess it's the reader's perspective that matters. I ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Monkey in the Fire
I%u2019ve been able to break the stanzas now, thanks to @koinoyokan
Mar 30, 2020 -
Re: Monkey in the Fire
Oh, thanks!
Mar 30, 2020 -
Re: Monkey in the Fire
Thanks :)
Mar 30, 2020 -
Re: Monkey in the Fire
I've tried separating them so many times while I click tool editor but it keeps going back to how it was %uD83D%uDE29
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Re: Not fat! Just Stout!
Hi there, Arch reviewing. I'm a fan of comedy poetry, so I really liked this one. It's the kind that would put a smile on my face, especially since it's ...
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Re: Not fat! Just Stout!
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Mar 29, 2020
Hi there, Arch reviewing. I'm a fan of comedy poetry, so I really liked this one. It's the kind that would put a smile on my face, especially since it's ... -
Re: Not fat! Just Stout!
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Mar 29, 2020
Hi there, Arch reviewing. I'm a fan of comedy poetry, so I really liked this one. It's the kind that would put a smile on my face, especially since it's ... -
Re: Not fat! Just Stout!
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Mar 29, 2020
Hi there, Arch reviewing. I'm a fan of comedy poetry, so I really liked this one. It's the kind that would put a smile on my face, especially since it's ... -
Re: Not fat! Just Stout!
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Mar 29, 2020
Hi there, Arch reviewing. I'm a fan of comedy poetry, so I really liked this one. It's the kind that would put a smile on my face, especially since it's ...
